Wednesday, April 19, 2006

Losing touch...

Sitting, in a hospital, waiting to hear the doctor's news. Bitting my nails, woundering what was going on! I hear a scream, a terrorizing scream! More tension was built inside me!
Where is he, where is he I yelled at the nurse who was passing by- Calm down, she said with a firm voice! I was scared, I was anxious, I was desperate!!! I waited and waited and still no news.
Is he dead? I asked myself!
What is going on in there! I felt like running towards the door and going in to where he laid.
He is the man I love, I answered when the doctor asked for a family member. I am sorry miss you are not a relative, he exclamed! I was devastaded, I tried to persuade him until he said I could go in. When I finally get granted the wish to go see him, I waited out side, took a deep breath and softly opened the door. There he was, laying there, stiff, not moving any muscle! I stood by his side, and soon I bursted out in tears, could it be? Could he really be dead! I rapidly demanded to know. To know why he didn't love me? why he lied? why he cheated? I was furious, but no matter how strong I felt and wanted to kill him, another part of me loved him so... Not knowing what to do! I started to talk to him I told him everything I felt how much I loved him and how much I wanted him to be okay. He is in coma, replied the nurse, she told me that everything would be alright. WAIT, WHAT IS THAT!!!! Why is he jumping whats going on, is he gonna die? why was he there? What happened to him? Get out!!!- The doctor shouted, I was nervous So nervous that I couldn't move!!! The dragged me out of the room I was desperate was I going to lose him? I was so uncontrolable that they took me away...
Where was I going I couldn't see anything! All was dark, I could only hear a vague voice, that said; I love you ... It's time... Hold my hand... Be mine...
What I didn't recognize the voice whose was it! Oh no I can't breathe, I am losing my senses...
Get me out of here ! I yelled what's wrong Can't anybody hear me...

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW Miky, It almost makes me cry :( But its great I like it a lot!! You write so well no mater of the orthography I'm awful at it 2.
Anyway I Like It A Lot

Anonymous said...

WOW Miky, It almost makes me cry :( But its great I like it a lot!! You write so well no mater of the orthography I'm awful at it 2.
Anyway I Like It A Lot,
Sj.

miky said...

Thank u, ur awesome!!!
I really appreciate you leaving a comment on my blog!
Love you Syl!!!

Anonymous said...

jeje thats true spiderman, anyway i never understand the things that miky write jaja I understand this one, but if u say that i really dont understand it so much

Sj.

miky said...

Well guys it's really not my life, here!!! It was just a story I made up!!! Felt like writting but not bout me particulary! Just writting!! Thanx 4 the advice though!!!
You guys rock!!
Love you

Juan said...

hello, very interesting though, you say it's not your life but it feels like it